You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• Give details of your study plan
• Explain why you want to get a part-time job
• Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Sarah,
I hope you and your family are all well !
I am writing to inform you that my departure date to Canada is drawing near and I am busy with preparations. I have enrolled myself at "University of Ontario, Toronto" for 2 years master of business administration program, fulltime. This will be bit expensive but I am sure it will certainly foster my professional growth and hone my general management skills required in daily life.
To assist in covering the cost of my study I aim to find a part-time job. I know, not only the college fees are rather high but also the accommodation charges in capital city will not be cheap. So I would very much like to have some temporary arrangement before I arrive.
I was wondering if you could ask among your friends,colleagues or relatives to see if anyone needs a gardener, cleaner or baby-sitter for their children. I know you have wide social network in Ontario, which you could canvas for me if you would not mind. I would really appreciate your help.
I look forward to meet you soon !
Love,
Amandeep Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g near and I am busy with preparations. I have enrolled myself at 'Universit...
^
Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , colleagues
...ring if you could ask among your friends,colleagues or relatives to see if anyone needs a g...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld canvas for me if you would not mind. I would really appreciate your help. I...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I would really appreciate your help. I look forward to meet you soon ! Love...
^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...appreciate your help. I look forward to meet you soon ! Love, Amandeep Singh
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78306878307 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00812565124 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693121693122 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4877629442 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284076779935 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103366709742 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750399152608 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158391683476 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835585385961 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.