Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged.
Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete
become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Modern Societies nowadays require juvenile’s minds who are both competitive and cooperative for progression. However, many people believe that adolescents who are taught to co-operate become more successful adults than those who are taught to compete. I staunchly agree with this statement. In my opinion, children should be taught co-operation as this builds the right base for them to co-work with the external interfaces for achieving long term success and becoming moral citizens. In the below essay I will elucidate both sides of the argument and put forward my opinion to conclude.
Firstly a sense of competition inculcated in students help them to work hard towards their goals and perform well than their peers. Additionally with these competitive skills students at a juvenile age tend to become self-dependent, responsible since they are required to solve puzzles, examinations and other problems as well. Therefore, while facing a challenging situation in professional life for instance a job interview students with competitive skills tend to perform well and are eventually able to lead a successful life.
Similarly, it can be seen that there are others who argue that children should be taught co-operation than anything else. Such a quality will enable them to be a better team player while they work with their peers in office, follow an instruction from their boss or provide training to their juniors. Hence this skill once acquired will allow them to perform their duties well in office and lead to success in professional life. Additionally, with reference to social life, a healthy society should include members who are interactive and co-operative with each other. This will enhance sociability and harmony in society.
To conclude it is evident that although a sense of competition is necessary for survival however skills such as co-operation are mandatory for achieving success and becoming devoted citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Additionally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42434210526 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94996471351 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5677746698 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224738464772 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815237925705 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086396903305 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135217306226 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780192496595 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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