Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Due to advancement of modern sophisticated technology, people have reached to different planets into the Universe which created the heated arguments between the living entities. Some people believe that spending useful resources on space exploration is not necessary whereas others believe that it is important for the betterment of humankind. While I understand the positive and negative side of this debate, I believe both perspectives are important for progress.
Spending valuable resources on space is not essential, as there are several problems on earth which need to address first. First and foremost, reason is that some part of the world still do not have basic amenities like water, health infrastructure, and so on. Due to less facilities in these countries, it would make people's life difficult as they do not have better surviving conditions. As a result, such countries will go into economic crisis or civil war to find suitable services. In addition, space exploration is new topic for the scientists because they do not have complete knowledge about universe. Nevertheless, they spend nation's budget into research, and during this some of the projects will fail, which is totally waste of public's hard earning money. If they can allocate this fund for providing necessities to public, lifestyle of public can be better.
On the contrary, others opine that it is necessary to explore universe because individual can gain abundance knowledge and surviving techniques from this research. To explain that mankind can benefit from space visit because with this significant information, they do research and may find weather conditions of different planets. If there is any possibility of suitable environment to live on, it would be better to move there. Moreover, we can learn the weather patterns of our planet through the satellites orbiting into space, which will be helpful for the threats coming to our planet. For example, asteroids and solar storms coming towards globe can destroy the large area, to avoid these catastrophes, space explorations provide great surviving techniques for living kind. Therefore, space exploration is an essential part to live comfortably in this world.
To conclude, there are certain ups and downs for space exploration, however, in my opinion, it is necessary to focus on both sides because people also need some of the base requirements to live on this planet.
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... on both sides because people also need some of the base requirements to live on this plane...
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...e requirements to live on this planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34725848564 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84208422694 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563968668407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7058823529 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.470588235 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267258318291 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847672300127 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579263442613 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171602354189 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436590417407 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.