Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of people's lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that adolescence is the happiest time in people's lives. However, some people argue that adulthood has more merits than teenage time. In my opinion, both of these periods of life have their own benefits.
The main reason people believe that teenagers experience the most enjoyable time of their lives is the lack of adulthood responsibilities. Most youngsters are provided with shelter, food, education. Eventually, they do not have to care about earning a living, finance situation in their country and family. Therefore, teenagers have a lot of free time which they can spend to interesting activities, for example, sport, music or computer games. Indeed, a huge amount of spare time and caregivers' support allow young people to make plenty of agreeable memories about their adolescence.
On the other hand, it is possible to say that adults can be happier with their lives than teenagers. First of all, although people have a lot of responsibilities and burdens, they have some freedom and rights in the society. The right to vote, for instance, is an important human right today. Mature person can choose place to live and work. Undoubtedly, people enjoy their independence. Adulthood can bring a lot of valuable moments such as a wedding day, obtaining a dream job, birth of a baby and so on. Not only do adult people have desires and aspirations, but also they can afford to achieve their goals and make dreams come true. If fact, adulthood is a stage when people have a full control over their lives and freedom to choose their own way to enhance the society and themselves.
In conclusion, teenage time and adult life can be enjoyable and unforgettable. In my view, it is wrong to decide which one of them is better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the youngsters') or simply say ''Most youngsters''.
Suggestion: Most of the youngsters; Most youngsters
...the lack of adulthood responsibilities. Most of youngsters are provided with shelter, food, educat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... valuable moments such as a wedding day, obtaining a dream job, birth of a baby ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... obtaining a dream job, birth of a baby and so on. Not only do adult people have...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to achieve'.
Suggestion: to achieve
...d aspirations, but also they can afford achieving their goals and making dreams come true...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9186440678 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75370268606 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4214977329 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6111111111 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217338783989 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075866693756 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715123155145 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164054372497 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114475014416 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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