Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful in school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is believed that everyday homework is essential for pupils to achieve success at school. However, some people argue that children should have some homework-free days because they need to rest after tiring school day and have time to interact with friends and family members. In opinion, using time after lessons to develop children's social skills is worth more than doing homework.
Admittedly, homework is one of the important and necessary parts of education. Everyday practice and regular revision keep pupils focused on the study process during the school year, allow them to obtain a deeper understanding of the subjects and, inevitably, improve their academic performance. Learning a foreign language, for instance, without everyday reading, writing and speaking practice cannot be as productive as it could be. Indeed, not only must pupils study at school, but also they should complete everyday home tasks in order to enhance their knowledge.
On the other hand, some people believe that children, especially pupils in a primary school, need homework-free days because it is difficult and quite stressful to study all day long without time for recreation. Undoubtedly, children might find the educational load extremely laborious. Their brains require an efficient time of rest. Therefore, children should be allowed to play with friends, interact with relatives, spend time with their parents instead of additional study. In fact, this approach is beneficial for children's physical and mental health.
In conclusion, while some people argue that homework should be given every day, others think that pupils need more time for recreation activities. In my view, children study enough during their classes and should spend time after lessons on developing bonds with friends and family members.
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also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49103942652 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61870579109 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0987290563 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34073223544 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11022486065 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994714269842 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216570522884 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645363599905 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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