Some people think that there are now too many cars on the roads, and they are spoiling our
towns and cities.
Do you agree or disagree?
As the world develops, it is becoming urban and the number of urban dwellers is rising. Hence, people prefer to feel independent, so the using of motor vehicles has increased widely. In my opinion, I agree that the growing number of motor vehicles on roads deteriorates our metropolis cities and town since it encompasses a wide range of problems.
First, the high demand for automobiles is greater than available street capacity, which induces traffic congestion. For example, a substantial proportion of people commute to their workplace by their own cars, so cities cannot hold a large number of automobiles. As a result, the traffic severely disrupts and this contributes to not only generating a constant noise in conurbations but also wasting time.
Second, air pollution is one of the detrimental impacts of having too many cars in towns and cities. This is because cars produce poisonous gas- carbon dioxide- which associates with polluting the air we breathe. Therefore, the toxic air affects our health in different ways from simple to serious problems. For instance, it could irritate respiratory tract, lower life expectancy and harm the lung.
Finally, when numerous cars are on high speed routes, multiple vehicle collision occurs. This is due to many cars are too close to each other on highways. The impact is more likely to be deadly and the death toll may rise.
In conclusion, the significant number of cars pose a credible threat and cause catastrophic consequences. I, therefore, agree that too many cars ruin metropolis cities and conurbations in towns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...y their own cars, so cities cannot hold a large number of automobiles. As a result, the traffic s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2109375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83459205343 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1470072015 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145352390749 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048108089713 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631541496861 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809020223755 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048856493069 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.