Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
Taking for granted that technological advancement has made life more convenient. Hence, a vigorous debate has been triggered over whether working from home is preferable to commuting to the workplace on a daily basis. In my opinion, I believe that the benefits of working from home far surpass its drawbacks.
First, when telecommuters perform their jobs from home, they have the flexibility in managing working hours. This is because being outside the office provides workers more choices, so they have much time for their family and improve work life balance. Moreover, working from home associates with avoiding excessive work stress, for employees do not experience congested traffic that induces anxiety. For example, the stress of commuting at rush hour is counterproductive and leads to feeling exhausted before even commencing the working day.
On the negative side, depression is one of the main drawbacks since teleworkers spend most time solitary and feel socially isolated. As a result, they experience a drop in their productivity and loss their enthusiasm as well. Furthermore, by working from home, the chances of promotion will become less. To enumerate, it is more likely to have difficulties in managing teleworkers and monitoring their performance. Consequently, teleworking can negatively affect a person's career. A recent survey indicated that people who telework were less likely to get promoted.
In conclusion, while working from home has undoubted advantages, of which flexibility in scheduling their jobs is the most apparent, it has a few drawbacks as well. Accordingly, I think that the advantages of teleworking transcend the disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54085603113 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10278043668 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0263587906 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291175779597 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964719535294 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944454426739 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183831029923 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712920301223 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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