Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workforce. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
There is an opinion asserting that the university students must be provided with the qualifications required in the job market. Others believe that the main duty of universities is to give access to knowledge for its own benefits, not for the companies' needs. I, however, agree with the first view on the basis of some compelling reasons
To begin with, most people go to universities to finally get a good job. That is, spending so many years and much money on formal education, these students hope to find a suitable job when they compelete their education. If they have not already been trained for the requirments that employers seek, it would be a big conundrum for the graduates to be hired. Since being a university student is a time and energy consuming stage in life, many are incapable of putting effort in developing other skills which are needed by recruiters such as hands-on experience, copmuter knowledge, foreign languages, etc. A good illustration of that is the alumni who struggle for being hired being recruited for a prolong time, irrespective of their university degrees. Therefore, universities should shoulder the resposibility to educate students and improve their skills in afformenshened areas, not just theoretical science.
In addition, another justification is the fact that this could hugely affect gratuates’ income. It simply means that the more qualified and competant they are in the eyes of employers from the empoyers’ perspective, the higher chance they stand to get well-paid job opportunities to gain employment opportunities that are well-paying. Take those universities which offer additional courses relevant to today’s job market; their graduates are bound to increase their revenue compared to their counterparts who lack specific experience needed in the workforce.
In conclusion, I, for one, think that universities should not only focus on knowledge-based material in eduacation, but they also need to develop other skills required in the job market. Only in this way garduates have a chance to make a living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 698, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...gle for being hired being recruited for a prolong time, irrespective of their university ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31097560976 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0738179245 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600609756098 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5230859357 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320000576561 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105940594756 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942804023207 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194569361548 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908496344824 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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