Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sports, these days, are gaining popularity among people in many countries. While a few people believe that watching it, in free time, is a waste of time, others think in contrast. In my opinion, they are not a waste of time; therefore, I completely disagree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, one most evident reason is that people who watch games, they adopt it as physical activity. In other words, they start playing those sports which could be beneficial for their health. This is because numerous health diseases are prevalent among people due to lack of physical exercise. Yet watching sports on TV might act as a motivator for them. According to the recent survey, conducted by the guardian magazine, more than 80 per cent people watch sports because they want to play it in their real life and most of them start playing it later in their lives. In addition, it is also beneficial for those who are already acquainted to that game but can learn a few new techniques. Professional athletes in matches often invent new tricks, and learning it becomes very easy when audience see it, for example, in cricket, viewers usually observe spin and fast bowling to acquire skills of bowling splendidly.
Another imperative reason is that it helps in alleviating stresses of life. Life for some people is very stressful, and they find ways to release it somehow. Watching aid in diverting viewer’s attention from domestic problems or of work-related; therefore, many health experts generally recommend watching different types of games.
In summary, although some people think that seeing sport activity should not be a pastime, I believe that it has countless advantages, and it ought to be considered as a leisure activity as much as possible. This is due to the fact that it increases motivation to play and helps in learning new abilities, which are required for games with time. Moreover, mitigating anxiety is also a vital aspect of it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, in summary, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99082568807 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66596868233 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.681897263 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210010946109 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661040576668 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669689088296 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139255671477 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692007961407 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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