Some people think that young people should be ambitious Others believe that it is fine if young people do not have big aims in life Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Everyone want to be successful in the life and because of the few people ponder that youngster should have clear future plane what they to be in their life, however remaining trust that having a great aim does not help in any expect. I per my opinion, every person should have same aim, so that they can mold their life accordingly. In this essay I will discuss both the view and elaborate how having a clear goal would help individual.

Considering the scenario of life with goal. Some people believe that having a clear-cut goal would not help to everyone and the reason behind this is that, because of their bad past experience where they have planned something and failed to achieve that and at the end of the day they might feel unhappy with their pre-planning theory. For an instance, In India during 1990 most of the students enrolled them-self into the Civil engineering course because of high demand of civil engineer in the market, but unfortunately, market changed and most of them are could not get the job when they passed their educational program.

On the other side, there are group of people who strongly recommended that proper goal in the life would result in positive manners. And the cause behind this is, without proper planning if someone start directly working on the task, chances of failure or less efficiency will be high. For an example, there are many well reputed institutes who conduct personal interviews before giving admission to a student, because it is proven fact that person who have clear mindset what he want to become in his or her life works more effective way compared to other who just move without any objective.

To conclude, As I have discussed both the cases, and explained how a person without any target work in a less-effective way, but there most of the people who become successful in their life had made proper plan for their life. Thus, as per my understanding everyone should have proper object in their life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
... is, without proper planning if someone start directly working on the task, chances o...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...t person who have clear mindset what he want to become in his or her life works more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77485380117 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45416413117 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2918134177 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.454545455 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218192831093 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929350173289 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575166977616 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145321838898 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642823093213 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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