Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education degrees are somewhat necessary for young people according to some people, while others believe that vocational training should be imparted to young people, so that they can become contributors to society. In this essay I will be providing points on both the views and also, I would give my opinion on the topic.
Primarily, in the current era we see a lot of emphasis on university education. Young members of the society are going for degrees in engineering, medicine, business etc. This shows keen interest of millennial in university education. In my opinion, this is the way to go as university education provides dive into the sea of knowledge. For example, if we look at one of the world’s most literate nations i.e. United Kingdom has a big number of their youngsters coming out of their higher education system and contributing positively to their society. However, with this goes hands in hand with the method by which education is imparted in institutions. Such as, Finland is the most literate nation of the world according to a study in 2016, this happened as a result of their great education system from grass root level.
On the other hand, there is a large number of people who think that youngster should get vocational/skill training as Car mechanics, Builders, Plumbering instead of university education. They provide examples of yester years when people used to get such trainings which contributes eventually to the society as per their views. For instance, mainly skilled workers are exported from countries like Pakistan, India & Bangladesh to the middle eastern countries for jobs like mechanics, masons etc.
Recapitulating my article, I am a strong believer of proper education systems which provides knowledge as well as skills, which is only possible through higher education institutes. So as the world is becoming more demanding with the passage of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18122977346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87961907817 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588996763754 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1916112581 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262207999862 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784072101343 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069568592684 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149811477063 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916490321239 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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