Some people thonknyoung people are suitable for learning foreign languages. Some people think adults are more suitable. Discuss both and give your opinion.
In the cut-throat word of today's, having different language under their belt has great demand. However the skill and ability need to do this may different in each person. In this essay I shall discuss about the age difference and skill for learning foreign languages in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, childhood is a formative period, whatever subject taught to them is retains in their mind. There is no doubt true that, children do not hesitate to talk whether it is right or wrong as a result they learn everything so quickly. Moreover they good at using variety of tricks and simple techniques to study anything.
On the other hand, adult has plenty of qualities than children. Firstly, experience is the major reason they have life experience as oppose to child. They are capable to differentiate the situations and idea where to apply but kids do not know where, when and how.
In addition, they already knows one language to compare with another. In this way learning will be much easier. Furthermore, they might have friends from other countries aswell as opportunities are more such as online courses, library, dictionaries and so forth. Today world going tough and hardest to find a job so they put their full effort to learn foreign languages to landing a secure employment.
In conclusion, considering the facts ,ability and ambitions adult are more apt than children. However there are a few children has shown their talent in this area
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9837398374 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61513262247 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654471544715 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2995416174 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687129054938 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231848661546 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319565323633 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368587372144 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179220678471 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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