For Some people TV advertisements are considered good for society while other consider them bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Thesedays, commercials are the most popular source of airing the products on t.v. Some people have an opinion that adverts have a positive impact on society, where other people have opposite viewpoint. However, I believe commercials on tv are for people to upgrade in different ways. Further, it depends on people how they get influenced by it.
Various factors prove that advertisements can have certain results on people. Firstly, the commercials are becoming a favorite source of gaining financial knowledge, which can help in increasing the economic growth of the country as well as an individual. For example, today, most banking institutes advertised on tv about their financial products among the people, which as a result attract people interested in them. Hence commercials through the tv directly reach to their customers. Secondly, the commercial is the best way to know different type of products, places, educational institutions and many more. That show people can keep themselves updated all the time by sitting under one roof.
On the other hand, some people have thoughts that advertisements can adverse effects on a community. First and foremost, sometimes people felt because of the inappropriate content is shown on tv can be harmful to youngsters. For example, data shows that youngsters get influenced by advertisements and made them eager to follow them, as a result, they lead on wrong paths. For example, smoking is becoming the most common thing among youngster to flaunt in their group. Moreover, People get attracted towards such kind of products because of fancy way of advertisements, which do not have worth for them. Also, that can lead to many severe problems such as skin problems, hair loss and many more.
In conclusion, advertisements shown on tv can have both the positive and negative impact on their lives. However, I believe it's every person perspective how they opt commercial media in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23642172524 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87797541688 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549520766773 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7814388593 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4117647059 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203427883821 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691377540036 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564215580805 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127659071022 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497996801849 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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