You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter> say where you think you left the papers>explain why they are so

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about some documents, that I might have left during the conference held in your hotel Country Inn on 26 august 2018 in the imperial conference hall Block-C.

Those documents are really important for me, as they include my company whole year production plan. Moreover, I didn't get a chance to create a backup of those documents, when I reached back home and realized that documents are missing. However, according to my knowledge I had kept those documents on the left hand-side corner table in the blue folder.

I have a request to you, could you check with your hotel staff who is on duty that day in that conference hall, might be they have some information about documents. Please give me a call on my mobile 123456789. I will arrange for a pick up from your hotel at the earliest possible time.

I am looking forward to hear from your soon.

Your Sincerely,
Nancy

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire abou...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...whole year production plan. Moreover, I didnt get a chance to create a backup of thos...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d-side corner table in the blue folder. I have a request to you, could you check...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... possible time. I am looking forward to hear from your soon. Your Sincerely, Nan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77914110429 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54579790656 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2463150819 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5555555556 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214661212231 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672437683534 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069501900237 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104785148851 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834189651283 0.0580467560999 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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