Some people who failed at school can be highly successful in their adult life. Discuss why does this happen? What are the main factors to get a successful life?
It has been seen that a few school drop-outs tend to achieve a great success in their life. This essay lays emphasis on the main cause of high success rate among the failed students and I believe hard work and clear aim are the two main traits of a prosperous life.
The fundamental reason for academically failed students' success is that they pay firm attention and devote entire time to their goals. Drop-outs have no other educational responsibilities to cater than their life goals. For them, working for their ultimate goals is the only task left in their lives hence they give their best shot to achieve their targets. Bill Gates, president of Microsoft, is a good paradigm of this, who was expelled from the school due to his poor performance and he worked tirelessly to make Microsoft Windows then become richest man on the earth. School attendees, on the other hand, have to cope with the vast syllabus and in order to secure higher scores; they dispense their large proportion of time to the curriculum. After schooling, students hunt for the job and then left with no time to pursue their passion or dream.
Working tirelessly and clarity about the goal are two major attributes of a successful life. Considering clarity in aim at first, the aim of work should be outlined initially and it ought to be very crisp and clear. Failures more often than not change their motives; they follow the crowd and go for short term achievements. Winners set a long term goal and endeavour to arrest it. Also, in order to ensure the victory in targets, zealous work plays a pivotal role. The person should convert every wall of the obstacles into the bridge with his endless efforts. Virat Kohli, a prominent player of Indian cricket team, is suitable example who made his mind to become a cricketer in his early life from school time and practiced for 18 years long time. He resultantly is a world's best batsman in current time due to his efforts and clear aim.
In conclusion, owing to the attentive nature of students, who failed in schools, for their targets, they arrest success in their life. Zeal, tenacity and clear mindset about the goals are two main characteristics of being a successful in the life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'few schools'.
Suggestion: few schools
It has been seen that a few school drop-outs tend to achieve a great succe...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...damental reason for academically failed students success is that they pay firm attention...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'become the richest'.
Suggestion: become the richest
...relessly to make Microsoft Windows then become richest man on the earth. School attendees, on ...
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Line 5, column 772, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the best'.
Suggestion: worlds the best
...18 years long time. He resultantly is a worlds best batsman in current time due to his effo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76103896104 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49878229747 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8985495834 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262677264056 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860112711818 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770544377366 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20938798846 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878245786935 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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