Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.
As the fields related to Artificial Intelligence and Robotics are enjoying and upsurge of popularity through the world, as a result, all items are increasingly manufactured by machines instead of humans. Although, certain people are skeptical about the quality and reliability of the products manufactured by automatons. I still strongly believe that in the future, the quality of robot produced products will undoubtedly beat humans as the fields of science and technology are progressing rapidly.
Handmade products, firstly, require an enormous amount of time and efforts. Consequently, the delivery time and the cost of these products are naturally high. For example, a handmade ordinary furniture requires at least 10 days of a carpenter’s efforts, whereas, it can easily be manufactured in a day or two by an automatic machine. Therefore, in today’s fast paced life, more often than not, people do not wait for such a long delivery time. Contrary to popular belief, it is undeniable fact that each human has different expertise and experience of their field. Therefore, it is not always the case that the manmade products are good. Often, customers encounter cases where the products made by man are done hastily and with substandard quality.
Robots and machines, on the other hand, are increasingly deployed by manufacturing industries as they drastically increase productivity and reduce the cost. However, some people argue that the quality of products delivered by this machines are not up to the mark. This I believe is not a correct notion, as the research and development in industrial manufacturing has reached an unprecedented level, the quality delivered has been improving. Furthermore, the precision delivered by machine is always on the higher side. A recent research done by the America Industrial manufacturing Unit has concluded that the quality of products produced by machines are 30% higher when compared to human.
From the above argument, it can be concluded that with the advent of computerization and digitalization, the manufacturing industries have undergone a huge revolution, as a result, the quality and standard of products have improved a lot, and it would not be wrong to state that they clearly beat the manmade products in all aspects. Therefore, I prefer using products made by an automaton rather than manmade.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'handmade ordinary furniture'.
Suggestion: handmade ordinary furniture
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, at least, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38172043011 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13836689144 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4152295603 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.764705882 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166141868972 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495138639654 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378272390978 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982387326833 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524735922666 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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