Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film starts, pop musicians and sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree?
Which other type of jobs should be highly paid?
In today’s glamorous world, where people from the entertainment industries achieve enormous success both in terms of money as well as status. As a result, certain section of the society believes that they are overpaid than what they deserves. Whereas, others have contrasting views claiming that they fully justify their huge pay-slips. In my opinion, considering their talents along with extreme hard work, they deserve what they are being paid. Additionally, noble professions such as scientists, teachers, and doctors must also be paid more.
Firstly, one of the most obvious reasons behind the trend of celebrities’ colossal earnings is the sheer talent and innovation they possess. Alongside these, they put-in tremendous hard work in fostering their skills in reaching the top most position. Secondly, entertainers have had significant influence on the people, acting as a role models to society. As a result, businesses and product sellers uses celebrities in advertisements and product endorsements generating huge profits. Therefore, celebrities receive their profit share which usually is a big pay. For instance, Shahrauk khan who is India’s one of the greatest actors of all time has earned approximately 600 crore rupees exclusively through advertisements in the year 2017.
On the other hand, along with celebrities, three other noble professions deserves higher pays. They are, scientists who acts as a major contributor in national progress deservers more. Additionally, medical professionals like doctors and nurses serving the humanity by easing the pains of sufferers must be paid handsomely. Finally, teachers are another important professionals who currently are being under paid and underestimated. Therefore, they deserves higher remunerations with decent benefits.
To conclude, in today’s time with the boom in entertainment industry provides entertainers a lot of financial benefits which they no doubt deserves, especially considering their creativity and talent. However, many other noble professions contributing in prospering the nation must also be respected by paying more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
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Suggestion: deserve
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'deserve'
Suggestion: deserve
...aid and underestimated. Therefore, they deserves higher remunerations with decent benefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84935897436 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19608821299 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637820512821 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.219020413 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.388888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3888888889 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116584189091 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374007087129 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034823157139 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076531207281 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345213109738 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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