Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s world no one can argue that many houses, bungalows and other constructions are replaced by high-rise apartments in many cities. As the increase demand of new residential areas in a city, many modern condominiums have been built rapidly. Some people assert that living in an apartment can make a person feel lonely and have many drawbacks, while others say that there are many advantages. Both sides will be discussed carefully.
On the one hand, living in a high-rise apartment becomes a popular trend in modernized society. This is because, there are many good sides of staying in those buildings. Firstly, most high-rise apartments are located in the central part of a city which all surrounds with a variety of public transportation and businesses. With a better standard of life and effective transportation around, many condominiums attract lots of people to live there. Secondly, this type of accommodation also provides a high class of lifestyle by offering different facilities such as gyms, swimming pools, saunas or community clubs which can entertain all residents. Moreover, the cost of buying a condo is much cheaper and also more reasonable than getting a house in a metro area, thus many citizens are more likely to gravitate towards living in a modern condo without any hesitation these days.
On the other hand, there also are abundant drawbacks of staying in a condo. Firstly, the layout of every room is a similar idea and almost the same in the whole building which may not build for personal preference. Even though, some buildings allow owners to breakdown or renovate their places without any limitation, some apartments still have very strict regulations and do not allow demolishing the layout of room. Secondly, having a condo requires an expensive monthly maintenance which includes all expenses such as electric, hydro and cutting grass. However, some people argue that many condos over charge the maintenance fee. Moreover, many researchers have revealed that many high-rise apartment residents are more likely to develop depression and emotional problems than house residents.
In conclusion, both sides have very strong arguments. Personally, the merits of living in a condo are still much more than demerits. However, it depends on an individual because everyone has different preferences and perspective about choosing accommodation.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35543766578 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88739431375 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570291777188 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1970826731 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.263157895 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231580223072 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069692148436 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665358811803 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135432105237 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742063365934 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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