Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and that this is their parents' fault; others say that schools are to blame.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, there are different sources from which children learn. They either learn from their parents or school. It is believed that, both of them play a vital role in building up a child. Some people believe parents to be responsible; while on the other hand few believe schools to be responsible. This essay will discuss the roles of school and parents play in building up behavior of children.
Our current generation is going through a tough phase, as behavior of our children has become worsened. Initial growth and learning of children comes from home. They are taught mannerism, differentiate between good and bad, how to behave in society and ways they can contribute towards betterment of society. It is prime responsibility of parents to monitor their children. Moreover, it is also important that parents keep an eye on their children while they are going to school, as during growth period children spend majority of time in home. Therefore, it is important for parents to monitor their children.
As parents have their own set of responsibilities for monitoring their child, it is also vital that schools play their role. These days we have noticed behavior of children to get worsened,it has caused them to become more violent. Furthermore, we have seen incidents of violence take place in schools, as that point and time it is prime responsibility of schools to monitor children because during that tenure parents aren't there to monitor.
Character building of any children depends on two major pillars firstly parents and secondly schools. These days behavior of children has worsened and violence has increased. Prime responsibility of this goes to parents as they spent more time with their children as compared to schools but role of schools can't be neglected. Therefore, it is important that both pillars perform their particular responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18092105263 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82197542044 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3527587394 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256383643546 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961839741783 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546156330748 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174541091759 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348399420577 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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