Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of and give your own opinion.
Marriage is a most beautiful and special event of our life and choosing a right life partner is the most critical decision of our life. It is commonly believed by many that we should marry for love. However, some people defend this belief and says it is rational to marry for money. This essay examines both these views and present my opinion about the same.
To begin with, when someone marry for love he could fight with all the curses of the whole world through his power of love. Although, there could be shortage of funds or facilities but, sometimes true love even fades the luxurious living. Getting married for love gives you courage to deal with any tough situation as a team together. When there is love and respect in relation, there is openness, frankness, trust and happiness which are the most important foundations of any relation.
However, on the other side, marry for money is also wiser in some situation. For example, marrying a government employee is considered as a wise decision in India because the person through his financial status could fulfil your desires to a great extent. It is also said that you can buy anything from money so when you marry a person with lots of money, you could buy anything. You do not have to struggle or sacrifice anything and may live rest of your life smoothly and stress free as you know the future of yours and your next generation is secure in terms of finances.
In my opinion, I would suggest marry for love because although, money can buy anything but it could not buy you happiness and love. It is better to live happy and poor rather than miserable and rich. In a survey conducted by Delhi University on fifteen hundred rich couples, surprisingly only twenty percent of them were happy in their life although they all enjoy luxurious lifestyle.
In conclusion, marriage is an auspicious event and we could choose our better-half on the basis of money or love. At one side, marry for money could give you comfort, facilities that love could not give however marry for love could give you satisfaction and happiness for life that money could never give.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, you know, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72311827957 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39001776869 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1046043992 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.352941176 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402340738473 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133990935977 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10816939325 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218505635593 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592945889581 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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