Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
There is no deny that people enjoy playing sports. Few sports in particular are much more risky than others. In this essay we will look forward the need for such sorts of entertainment and safety, precautions which an individual can undertake when going for them.
First of all, sports such as bull fighting, sky-diving, high-speed car races give people an adrenaline rush. It really brings that thrill and excitement for one who seeks for it. For instance, anyone who is afraid of high altitudes should go for sky-diving or trekking on mountains to conquer their fear of acrophobia. So, participating in such sort of activities would bring more courage within themselves and they would feel much content and sense of achievement when facing such challenges boldly. Another reason, for people would normally take on such hazardous tasks is for the goal of having recognition by aiming for world records.
On the other hand, having involvement in risky games is no cause to ignore well-being of themselves. People should take on any such challenges with proper safety gears such as helmet, knee-pad, body shielding which would protect them if in case they are met with any sort of accident where ever they are. To illustrate, the Mexico bull-fighting is notoriously famous world-wide. Every year several people have met with early deaths in bull pit because of not having body protection on them. Policymakers should be vigilant to dead in such sort of sports and should set proper guide-lines so that any unfortunate incidents does not occur.
In conclusion, such games does come with own sets of perks and fun. Although, they are quite risky, it can be reduce to significant levels if the precautions mentioned above can be put check in place by both government and those who take on such life-risking sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, sort of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06028368794 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75667883609 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63475177305 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5273021829 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115992422534 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408849115547 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388330647899 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684654703657 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354304099245 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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