Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Be it playing or simply watching, sports is a large part of everyone’s lives and in some countries like India the players are worshiped like gods. Such conditions lead to well-renowned players garnering extensive amount of income compared to other professional which has been seen as an unfair situation by some people. In this essay, I will elaborate on both these views, even though I am of the opinion that this disparity is not justified.
In countries like England, few sports are highly viewed and their players gain popularity provided they are successfully raising up the ranks. This fandom means they are always under the eye of their fans and various brands find this as an excellent way to display their products. Uber a brand which is not related to sports, for instance, has on-boarded the Indian cricket team’s captain as its brand ambassador resulting into higher usage from his fanbase for the company’s products. Moreover, these professionals put in such a great show at the matches with their outstanding performance, that they are paid a hefty pay cheque just to keep them on the team.
Although these sportsmen have millions of viewers who buy tickets and spend on related merchandise, I believe that it cannot justify them getting more importance and higher salaries compared to jobs such as doctors, firemen or solders. The men and women working in these sectors, risk themselves on regular basis to help save the lives of others. A good example of this is the healthcare workers in the pandemic, who are working long hours with high threat to their personal safety. During a challenging time, we have seen that such professionals become the lifeline of the country’s wellbeing, but they are still under appreciated when compared to cricket or tennis players.
In conclusion, the people who should be awarded with greater admiration and higher salaries are getting neglected in front other athletes. This in my opinion is quite disheartening and I believe it is time we individually start giving a more importance and visibility to other professionals which will help them receive an equal or higher pay in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06179775281 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78121664284 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.848811664 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.615384615 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184853255212 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600252794944 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420351372891 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112439369846 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477529134051 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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