'Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming

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'Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?

Work from home is increasing in almost all the countries of the world. It is convenient for both employees and employers. This concept of telecommuting is beneficial for the society from social, economical and environment point of view.

From a social point of view, it may positively affect the family which is a core part of the social community. In most of the countries, either parent, especially a woman, will have to leave the job to take care of the child. The concept of work from home enables them to work without going office, making themselves free from the guilt of leaving the child alone at home. Due to this time flexibility, they could spend more time with family, friends and children, which is the sign of a healthy society where people interact and become socialize with each other. Thus, it is the great step towards mental health of people and so flourishing civilization.

From an economical point of view, it helps to grow global economy. As many constraints like time, travelling and social responsibilities are removed by this concept of work from home, more citizens joined the workforce, as a result, production has improved and also the wealth of the country. From another point of view, employers would not have to think about the availability of the resources like workforce, office space, telephones, office stationeries and computers, which decreases the cost of production.

Also, the environment will also be benefitted by this policy. For example, because people will not have to commute to the office every day, not only traffic will be reduced but also air pollution will be diminished.
In conclusion, due to computers, information technology and telecommunication, it has become possible to create a virtual office in the world where people from anywhere could be hired and cost of production could be reduced. Consequently, not only employee and employer but also society as a whole would gain from this.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266483516484 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.123626373626 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0686813186813 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521978021978 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.021978021978 0.0437548338989 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131868131868 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0357142857143 0.0403226058552 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88966268917 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274725274725 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10989010989 0.0861772015684 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0302197802198 0.021408717616 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0137362637363 0.011925033212 115% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1955.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07142857143 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341614906832 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251552795031 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173913043478 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139751552795 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88966268917 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534161490683 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 56.0153655967 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4666666667 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1065328219 49.517814964 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.6219461698 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.19444444444 1.69124875643 130% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345088480326 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138452923743 0.102741220458 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0994188306878 0.0668466124924 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.616906587228 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142622573941 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145293365276 0.134430193775 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574527719516 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355146443421 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.17253941536 0.0638462369009 270% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224326837055 0.228012699653 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672451947962 0.058150111329 116% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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