Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree
Many great inventions have benefitted humans related to their work, communication, and entertainment. But at times, this has also impacted negatively on Humans. I strongly agree that the invention of Television has made people more lethargic as well as unsociable.
Firstly, let us consider its impact on children. Teenage is the period for the children to play, grow, and to make friends. But, more often it has found that they prefer to stay at home and watch cartoons rather than playing out games and gossip around. I, recollect my school days where we use to wait for the vacation and holidays to meet friends and discuss about new games as well as played with sands. Nowadays, parents can't handle the stubbornness and crying of their child, hence they ON television shows to stop them from cry.
In addition, even mature adults are found to be more obsessed with the entertainment set. Certain shows which last long for years creates an impression in the minds of the viewer. An individual at times starts connecting themselves with those fictions characters. As a result, it disturbs their life and leads them to live in their imaginary world which negatively impacts their brain and health. In their leisure time, few people prefer to sit in front of it for long hours and avoid spending their quality time with family, friends, and children.
In conclusion, I would say that though the television keeps us entertained and provide us any information of our surrounding, one should limit its time with it and divert that time in reading a newspaper or go out for shopping or gathering with friends and family to build a strong relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rest in the role of Event Organiser. I have successfully completed the course ...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ded and appreciated in my previous job. for organizing a successful event of '...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... event organizer for your reference. I look forward to your prompt response. ...
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Line 14, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thank you. Yours sincerely, Krutika
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12138728324 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0323084579 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.910953206 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263039526451 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877803679141 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627075535634 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133500277949 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601385186055 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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