You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays smoking has become a relative trend among the youth and consider a stress booster. Though people are aware that smoking is not injurious to health still they prefer to inhale such toxic. I strongly agree that it is illegal and unfair to smoke in a crowded place.
Passive smoking is more dangerous than active smokers. Hence many countries have banned smoking in an open surrounding. Even at buildings, the boards have been placed such as "No smoking allowed" or "Smoke-free area". People intend to smoke at a time when they are too stressed or internally addicted to it. Working-class people are found to smoke more often compared to other age groups.
Smoke contains a high amount of intoxicants. As per much research, it is found that people die because of the smoke inhaled in an open area compared to the ratio of the people who actually smoke. This resulted in restricting people from smoking in public places.
Moreover, it will bring inconvenient for smokers to step out of the house or building to smoke. This can be in other ways a helpful method to avoid smoking frequently. Though it is a difficult habit to break such a ban can be fruitful in deterrent the addiction to smoking.
To conclude, though smokers are aware of its threats still they smoke. Hence the government has initiated such bans and spread awareness of its outcomes in social media, Hoarding boards, cinema halls, etc. This approach will certainly discourage smokers to smoke to some extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Neighbours, I am writing this letter in regards to the issue raised in the parking area. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52394006218 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4285429607 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 4.34317383033 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247776689005 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887583727941 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718847509494 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138524351286 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985530815099 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.