The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
Human nature of following each other in terms of different things is gaining more attention these days.
As many other natural things one natural thing that a human possess is to observe. Observing everything that is happening in every nook and cranny of the world and then try to replicate the same in their own life. Saying that people see each other and then do/buy same things is not wrong.
In every aspect of life one can easily encounter that people like copying the things that they think will suit them or make them happy. The main example of this can be easily seen in the females. They see famous celebrities and try to copy their fashion sense, clothes they wear, bags they carry etc. Following someone upto some extent is not harmful until/unless a person is not getting into any bad company.
Advertising sector is taking full advantage of it, as they are very well aware about their target audience. They simply just hire a famous personality who actually has an impact on people and let them do the commercial of their product. This is not only a good economics technique but also a great way to earn profit with great margin.
I strongly agree that copying one another/ following one another is now becoming a trend these days. To look cool on social media or to satisfy one’s own will/ego , people start replicating the things which their idol do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: celebrities
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Suggestion: ,
...ia or to satisfy one's own will/ego , people start replicating the things whi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icating the things which their idol do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70954356846 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29727167329 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626556016598 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6292044516 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15801911286 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525010906916 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562121945592 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082084211993 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626384281318 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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