Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as cell phone) or a service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree.
Price of any item plays a vital role in its sales. People often choose rate over other qualities of the product while buying. Although price of any asset is important, sometimes services take over it. This essay will argue why price is not more important while buying anything.
In this era of advancement, everybody has plethora of options when it comes to anything they want to buy or any service they need. As a human tendency, everyone wants to get the best in the least i.e best product/service in the least amount. Is it really the correct way? If a person is getting something in less amount then chances are high that they have compromised with the quality.
Because the price of anything is less does not justify the reason to take it. To take an example suppose two companies launched their phones, specifications of both are same but there is a huge difference in their price. Most of the people end up buying phone with less amount but if they take or consider user reviews/ customer satisfaction rate they might end up getting disappointed.
Price of anything cannot justify the use of that product or the specialties of that product because if that is the case then Apple, the biggest cell phone selling company will never achieved its goal of becoming the best. To put a bit more light on this example, Apple phones have so many features, same features are present in other phones with less rate but people still go for I phone, this is because of the trust they have gained by providing the best services. To quote another example, various hospitals have wide varieties of medical treatments available but to choose a hospital just because its fee is less, does it really makes sense? Does a person’s health is below the price to pay for treatment? If any hpspital is charging higher than other because it is providing best treatment and results have already shown in their case.
In my opinion, I totally agree that people consider money over matters but the above essay argued why not to do this. As people say better late than never, so one should consider the best for itself nomatter how much price they have to pay for it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'e the best'.
Suggestion: e the best
...ne wants to get the best in the least i.e best product/service in the least amount. Is...
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Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...son is getting something in less amount then chances are high that they have comprom...
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Line 4, column 775, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'providing the best'.
Suggestion: providing the best
...harging higher than other because it is providing best treatment and results have already show...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, then, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43804676374 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534210526316 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6382717556 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232288810908 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672171520559 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426448049032 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124522479847 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314472731808 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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