the tendency of humans beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. to what extent do you agree ?
Human’s desire to imitate each other has been observed in many areas since the beginning of their journey on earth. Some people believe fashion is among those areas, and popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods is owing to the tendency of human beings to copy each other. On the other hand, some believe the desire to wear fashion clothes is due to human’s tendency toward captivating stuff and to look nice. I stand with the first group due to several reasons which will be discussed in the following.
To begin with, one of the strong instincts of humans is to be successful. Putting foot on a successful model’s footsteps is the main approach one will take in the path toward victory. Firstly, fashion icon people and models are considered successful by the majority of society inasmuch as rumors around them such as wealth, good physics and etc. Secondly, social medias and the movie industry dictates the values and merits of being a whizz-kid, and as it happens the heroes and alpha people introduced by them are up to the fashion and good looking. Consequently, the first and obvious model one finds to follow are models who always wear fashion clothes, therefore does he as well.
Moreover, another major aspect of people’s character if being ostentatious. One becomes slave to the fashion so that not only does he show that he affords to buy expensive new introduced clothes, but he imitates after models introduced by medias.
Granted what was said, it must be taken into account that some people do not have any other choice but to wear fashionable. For instance, in the marriage ceremony, people wish to look nice and tidy, and as it happens the only way will be to dress up if one wishes to do so.
To sum up, even though sometimes people are obligated to buy fashion clothes such as a tuxedo, the main reason behind the popularity of fashion dresses is the tendency of humans to copy successful people. These characters are introduced by networks and medias, and they usually choose latest designs and clothes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...round them such as wealth, good physics and etc. Secondly, social medias and the movie i...
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Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the latest'.
Suggestion: choose the latest
...y networks and medias, and they usually choose latest designs and clothes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88319088319 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58735892014 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8755278635 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.266666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275414356152 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091978353989 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805837511418 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144964546567 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505081148716 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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