There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Cultural diversity is an indispensible factor prevailing in all nations around the globe. Therefore, it is asserted by some that tourists should follow local customs, such as eating habits and dressing, while they travel to a country. I, however, partially agree with this statement for some compelling reasons.
To begin with, while the general citizenry is familiar with the local food culture, foreigners may not be acquainted with it. They would want to order dishes they are familiar with or can eat. For instance, although a country may be famous for its fried chicken or muttun burger, if the traveller is a vegan, he wants to consume only vegetarian dishes. Thus, he cannot be forced to eat non-vegetarian food since his food preference is strictly meat-free. Secondly, tourists are comfortable wearing their nation’s clothes. When someone goes to travel, they pack clothes that are produced in their own country. If people are restricted to wearing local clothes, they will have to spend money to buy them that may or may not be useful to them back home. Obviously, in this case also, we cannot force visitors to completely change their attire to match the local dressing ways. Thus, when visiting tourist areas, there should not be any restrictions based on the nation’s customs, such as food and clothing.
However, in my opinion, holiday-goers must follow the local rules and regulations when visiting religious places like temples and shrines. Local people are incredibly sensitive towards their religion. For example, in India, when you visit any gurudwara, it is compulsory for everyone, be it man or woman, to cover their heads with a piece of cloth. If someone disobeys or disrespects religion, it not only offends local citizens but also demonstrates a negative image of foreigners in their minds.
To conclude, despite the fact that various countries have disparate cultural aspects like food and clothes, international travellers should have the freedom to eat as well as dress as per their choice while roaming in tourist regions. Nonetheless, when visiting religious places, foreigners ought to follow the customs akin to the local practices.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22285714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73890191016 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5611998544 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145430752382 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442894063199 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325468798126 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955168037649 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295809663365 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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