There is increase of noise in our daily lives nowadays. Why is this a problem? What can be done to reduce it?
The noise pollution is increasing at an alarming rate around the globe. I shall shed some light on the possible causes of increasing noise and what measures that needs to be taken in this regard.
people have encountered a significant increase of noise in their lives recently. this is a big problem as individuals’ work and study will be affected and the most possible solution to reduce noise is forcing companies to move their factories to rural areas.
Individuals cannot work or learn effectively when they are frequently disturbed by too much noise. this is because people need quiet places to fully concentrate on what they are doing, or else, they will be distracted and will not be able to maintain their trains of thoughts. As a result, they will not be able to finish their projects at work or assignments from school. For example, a survey by the Thanh Nien newspaper reported that 75% of last-year students of the University of Technology in Ho Chi Minh city could not write their thesis essays for graduation even when they were in the school’s library due to the noise from a chain of Chevrolet’s car factories.
To reduce this increasing amount of noise, governments should force manufacturers in their countries to relocate their factories in the countryside. As these factories are the main culprit of noise pollution, moving them to less crowded areas will make sure that large cities and big towns will be noise-free. For instance, the government of Korea ordered two biggest automobile companies, Hyundai and Kia, to re-establish their factories in the far south where there was not a residential area in 2005. Since then, the amount of noise pollution in Seoul and Busan has been completely eliminated.
In conclusion, the increase of noise in modern life is a major problem because it badly impacts people’s daily work and studies. However, it can be tackled by imposing laws to make companies move their factories to rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07482993197 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94025535933 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1743864338 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215984725826 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899516375242 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685208338428 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159128016085 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065007400407 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.