There is no shortage of debate whether movies are popular or not. In my opinion, I firmly believe that human beings need entertainment in their life that can be provided by film. The reasons of watching film are: to gain knowledge, able to do conversation with international people, and helps to find job. I feel this way for the several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, movies are source of information which advocates all the people in the world. It is very imperative for gainng a knowlede. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I used watch-science fiction- movie. That movie was based on the priciple of garvitational force: which has helped me to think in different ways. I used to imagine about the universe and tried to find out the finding and discovery. As a result, this movie has motivated me to study science. I was admired by watching that movie and finally decide to shape my career as scientist. However, I was in confusion about my gaol before watching that movie.
Secondly, I considered movie like the university because people attend univeristy to gain knowledge. Movie is another source of knowlede; as it shows very important information. For example, when I watched a movie: Histroy of Nepal. It provides background informtion of Nepal whic I had also studied in my course. I enjoy and gain knowlede by watching movie; although, I had not cared in the class. There different method of learning among them watching movie is one of the best way.
Finally, as the movie are presented in different languages, which would also help to comprehend various languages. For instance, I used to watch Korean movie, when I was at high school. By watching these movie I was able to do conversation in Korean languag. Now i have job in travel agency; I take Korean tourist to different parts of our country. Consequently, I am doing that job and being financially strong. If hadn't watched Korean movie, I wouldn't have been involved in this job. So, I feel that watching movie can benefits to all the people.
To sum up, watching movie is worth to all the people this is because it helps in academic career, Provides fun, and makes finacially strong. Therfore, the best way to enhance our lfe is to watch movies.
There is no shortage of debate whether movies are popular or not. In my opinion, I firmly believe that human beings need entertainment in their life that can be provided by film. The reasons of watching film are: to gain knowledge, able to do conversation with international people, and helps to find job. I feel this way for the several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, movies are source of information which advocates all the people in the world. It is very imperative for gainng a knowlede. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I used watch-science fiction- movie. That movie was based on the priciple of garvitational force: which has helped me to think in different ways. I used to imagine about the universe and tried to find out the finding and discovery. As a result, this movie has motivated me to study science. I was admired by watching that movie and finally decide to shape my career as scientist. However, I was in confusion about my gaol before watching that movie.
Secondly, I considered movie like the university because people attend univeristy to gain knowledge. Movie is another source of knowlede; as it shows very important information. For example, when I watched a movie: Histroy of Nepal. It provides background informtion of Nepal whic I had also studied in my course. I enjoy and gain knowlede by watching movie; although, I had not cared in the class. There different method of learning among them watching movie is one of the best way.
Finally, as the movie are presented in different languages, which would also help to comprehend various languages. For instance, I used to watch Korean movie, when I was at high school. By watching these movie I was able to do conversation in Korean languag. Now i have job in travel agency; I take Korean tourist to different parts of our country. Consequently, I am doing that job and being financially strong. If hadn't watched Korean movie, I wouldn't have been involved in this job. So, I feel that watching movie can benefits to all the people.
To sum up, watching movie is worth to all the people this is because it helps in academic career, Provides fun, and makes finacially strong. Therfore, the best way to enhance our lfe is to watch movies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movie' or 'these movies'?
Suggestion: this movie; these movies
... when I was at high school. By watching these movie I was able to do conversation in Korean...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...versation in Korean languag. Now i have job in travel agency; I take Korean tourist...
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Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...at job and being financially strong. If hadnt watched Korean movie, I wouldnt have be...
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Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...trong. If hadnt watched Korean movie, I wouldnt have been involved in this job. So, I f...
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Line 4, column 521, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...job. So, I feel that watching movie can benefits to all the people. To sum up, watchin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74064837905 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73096139407 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531172069825 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8628341129 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.8928571429 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3214285714 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39285714286 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341108317675 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853143843729 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123691056632 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21520188174 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222484395449 0.056905535591 391% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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