here is no shortage of debate about whether people can entertain much more from watching a movie or reading novels. In my opinion, I firmly believe that it is worthwhile to watch a movie rather than study frictions. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, various people have different interests, however, I enjoy watching a movie. while watching a film I feel excited each and every moment, Although, when I open a book I started yawning. For example, when I commenced looking at movies, I have different kinds of energy in my body. I can even watch three, Four movies at a time. Furthermore, When I read the novel it takes a year to complete it because I feel boring while reading. In the movie their songs provoke me to dance. This illustrates that watching a movie is far better than learning fiction.
Secondly, Friction is very vast to comprehend; word used, sentence structure makes really frustrated to the people. Nevertheless, people can understand by looking at the scene, body language in the movie. My own experience is a compelling example of this. when I watch a Korean movie, I understood all the informative information and knowledge, Nonetheless, If I start to study Korean novels, I do not comprehend. Consequently, this kind of novel discourages and makes me feel that it is wasting of time. This instance depicts that watching a movie is much more enjoyable for me.
Finally, watching a movie helps people to develop personal skills. they will see the different things in the movie which enchant him. As a result, they emulate and try to do things in the real life. We know one saying, '" a single picture is worth than a thousand words", this is enough to say how important is a movie rather than a novel. People learn different skills like cooking, washing, playing, and many more other things from the movie. Let us illustrates this by taking the example of one of my friends, when we were in the room, he used to cook delicious food. I used to get surprised how he cooks ins such away. He answered me that by watching a movie he learned and became perfect.
To sum up, the evidence mentioned above is sufficient to say that watching a movie gives more entertainment than that of reading a fictional book. This is because friction is difficult to comprehend, Movie helps to develop personal sk`ills and makes to dance.
There is no shortage of debate about whether people can entertain much more from watching a movie or reading novels. In my opinion, I firmly believe that it is worthwhile to watch a movie rather than study frictions. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, various people have different interests, however, I enjoy watching a movie. While watching a film I feel excited every moment, Although, when I open a book I started yawning. For example, when I commenced looking at movies, I have different kinds of energy in my body. I can even watch three, Four movies at a time. furthermore, When I read a novel it takes a year to complete it because I feel boring while reading. In the movie their songs provoke me to dance. This illustrates that watching a movie is far better than learning fiction.
Secondly, Friction is very vast to comprehend; word used, sentence structure makes frustrated the people. Nevertheless, people can understand by looking at the scene, body language in the movie. My own experience is a compelling example of this. when I watch a Korean movie, I understood all the informative information and knowledge, Nonetheless, If I start to study Korean novel, I do not comprehend. Consequently, this kind of novel discourages and makes me feel that it is wasting of time. This instance depicts that watching a movie is much more enjoyable for me.
Finally, watching the movie helps people to develop personal skills. they will see the different things in the movie which enchant him. As a result, they emulate and try to do things in the real life. We know one saying, '" a single picture is worth than a thousand words", this is enough to say how important is a movie rather than a novel. People learn different skills like cooking, washing, playing, and many more other things from the movie. Let us illustrates this by taking the example of one of my friends, when we were in the room, he used to cook delicious food. I used to get surprised how he cooks ins such away. He answered me that by watching a movie he learned and became perfect.
To sum up, the evidence mentioned above is sufficient to say that watching a movie gives more entertainment than that of reading a fictional book. This is because friction is difficult to comprehend, Movie helps to develop personal skills and makes to dance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74346793349 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73797869371 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522565320665 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9152305392 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8076923077 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1923076923 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73076923077 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.529187920436 0.236089414692 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131664683186 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127160040519 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335093196738 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244531500254 0.0645574589148 379% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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