Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert and or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Over the last few years, there has been a significant rise in tourism industry. Plethora of tourists are Parv2203 to places with unfavorable conditions. Certainly the adrenaline gush being experienced by such expedition cannot be explained bin words but dangers involved are significant too. I will be discussing in my essay both advantages and disadvantages of the same.
On one side, travelling to hostile place boost confidence in one's abilities. Although the trek can be physically and mentally tiring, the exhilaration experienced by its successful completion takes traveller to another level of happiness. In addition small business like hotel industry, restaurants,etc are also thriving in the remote areas because of tourists.
Talking about the disadvantages, such arduous journey brings along numerous dangers. For instance travellers have died while trekking difficult mountains or rafting in unstable rivers. Every year govt. Has to launch expensive rescue operations in search of missing travellers.
To conclude, difficult journeys undoubtedly are very exuberating yet it's harmful results cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87272727273 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14343953675 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.787878787879 0.561755894193 140% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8735239727 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111396044476 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356868444547 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432350329715 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559282083399 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315820009628 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.17 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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