Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the Antrarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, many tourists goes to Sahara desert or the Antarctic which hard to travels. However, there are concerns that these have detrimental effects in my opinion, the potential dangers from this are greater than the advantages.
There are several reasons why travels in difficult condition more interesting and demanding by tourists. Firstly, it is to get mesmerize scenery and this is achieved in some places which encourage tourists to visit. Secondly, it is more challenging to travel and more excited, because tourists has to travel bravely to get there, these make them happier to visit. So again this is an advantage to the tourists that visiting Sahara desert is needed.
From this evidence, it is clear that the main benefit are, therefore, to the tourists have several problems that could be happen which have harmful effects. For example, accident in new zealand on 22nd July 2002, it was made a family end instantly, because they lost control on their car and it was fallen into gap. Of course they have a wonderful destiny but there are some risks that should be taken, so it is not recommended for tourists who wanted to enjoy they leisure time, that could make bad thing happen to them.
To conclude, despite the fact that there are benefits for tourists who travels, I believe that these make them happy and satisfied, but could be danger for them. So if tourists want to visit some places that hard to travel, they should bring tour guide who knows more about the places and could anticipate the harmful effects that happen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'traveling', 'travelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: traveling; travelling
...visit. Secondly, it is more challenging to travel and more excited, because tourists has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88593155894 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38221348462 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555133079848 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8609179583 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310849360082 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124168281147 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757140050233 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189954635834 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112566053376 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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