Today more people are traveling ever than before.
why is this the case?
what are the benefits of traveling for the traveler?
In this era of globalization and aiming to the immanent need of engaging to the other world, searching for new places to spend your time wisely and also exploring new countries and attracting destinations. Therefore, traveling has became of great interest and a national need.
The question raising here is, why everyone is seeking traveling than before, why it is easier now than before, and what is the benefits behind traveling, these outlines will be discussed below:
First of all, going from a place to another has became quite easier than 10 years ago. As before, it would cost you a fortune to take your family to a decent place in another country, either by sailing or booking a flight. Today, you can book a flight within minutes, without queuing, waiting your turn or even paying in cash, with only one click, everything will be done aiming to the internet and online websites that has saved much time and effort. Adding to this the competition between airlines to offer you low cost flights and comfortable seats.
Furthermore, the purpose behind traveling, could be finding a job or educational purposes. Adding to this, International students nowadays who keep running after scholarships, and applying for work permit visas or even immigrations. Hence, it has never been disclosed for enjoyment and entertainment purposes, but also for breadwinning and studying. Also, religious matters including seasonal ones, like what millions of muslims do every year.
Adding to this, the benefits behind traveling, either for kids or adults, as i think it rebuild and restructure their personality, also makes them more reliable to take responsibility, depend on themselves and work out their minds.
In conclusion, traveling has always been a tool reaching out for happiness and enthusiasm, also it fits all ages and its purposes are numerous and hardly counted, we should educate our newborns of how important traveling is and fill their minds with it’s benefits, giving them precautions but never restrict their vulnerability to see the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... destinations. Therefore, traveling has became of great interest and a national need. ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... all, going from a place to another has became quite easier than 10 years ago. As befo...
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Line 17, column 78, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...raveling, either for kids or adults, as i think it rebuild and restructure their ...
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Line 17, column 89, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rebuilds'?
Suggestion: rebuilds
...ither for kids or adults, as i think it rebuild and restructure their personality, also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24924924925 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82554019102 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636636636637 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7273404647 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261624684912 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754658555261 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689722757281 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127639308382 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839483981794 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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