Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
The advents of technology have made travelling much easy and convenient. It is an inevitable fact that nowadays, people travel more as compared to traditional times. The advancement in the means of transportation and the growth of economic wealth of individuals are the reasons for the elevation in the number of travellers. This emerging trend has a plethora of social and personal advantages.
To begin with, there are numerous factors that are responsible for the exaggerated passion of people in travelling. First and the foremost reason is the modernization of means of transport such as automated cars, rapid trains, technical buses and aeroplanes which has transformed the distances of days into hours. Additionally, travelling now has become quite affordable, making possible for people in different regions to travel. For instance, a survey conducted by National Tourism stated that the number of travellers in air flights has increased by 30% from the last ten years, following the cheap prices of flights.
Secondly, another crucial factor is the growth of economic wealth of an individual which has uplifted their standards of living. The rapid increase of industrialization has boomed the careers of workers, as a result, they become the owner of wealthy life and travelling to foreign countries has now become a part of their business.
It is undeniable that travelling to different places has several benefits. Primarily, visiting different countries or places
gives the opportunity to gain knowledge about new culture and tradition. Moreover, social relationships can also be made through travel visits which can further, help in developing business or trade. For example, The government of China has issued a policy that allows the native people to travel to neighbouring nations and can make business assignments with them, this results in the economic development of the native country. Next, people travelling to other countries contribute to tourism which generates multiple job opportunities for the people and therefore, raises their financial status.
In conclusion, it can be stated that transport advancements and increased wealth have uplifted the travelling phenomenon which has benefited the society and individual in terms of wealth and development. In the near future, it will definitely become a requirement for the concerned authorities to motivate the people for travelling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... fact that nowadays, people travel more as compared to traditional times. The adva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54177897574 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07175468902 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536388140162 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9815303091 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.941176471 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317009179149 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105471542466 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790814617981 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162034208446 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628977963959 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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