Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
The advents of technology have made travelling much easy and convenient. It is an inevitable fact that nowadays, people travel more as compared to traditional times. The advancement in the means of transportation and the growth of economic wealth of individuals are the reasons for the elevation in the number of travellers. This emerging trend has a plethora of social and
personal advantages.
First and the foremost reason for the passion of travelling is the modernization of means of transport such as automated cars,
rapid trains, technical buses and aeroplanes which has transformed the distances of days into hours. For instance, the flight from
Delhi to Amritsar can cover the distance of 500 kilometres in just 45 minutes. Secondly, another crucial factor is the rapid increase of industrialization which has not only boomed the careers of workers but also raised their standards of living, consequently,
making them able to fulfil their aspiration of travelling.
There are several benefits associated with travelling. Primarily, visiting different countries or places gives the opportunity to gain knowledge about new culture and tradition. Moreover, social relationships can also be made through
travel visits which can further, help in developing business or trade. For example, according to a policy the native people of China has authority to travel neighbouring nations and can make business assignments with them, this results in the
economic development of the native country. Next, people travelling to other countries contribute to tourism which generates
multiple job opportunities for the people and therefore, raises their financial status.
In conclusion, it can be stated that transport advancements and increased wealth have uplifted the travelling phenomenon which has benefited the society and individual in terms of wealth and development. In the near future, it will definitely become a requirement for the concerned authorities to motivate the people for travelling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65789473684 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12075196031 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5497134111 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.857142857 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269078917012 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902496224198 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654981154836 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934405400621 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849004476748 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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