Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?
To what extent do you support this development?
The issue of early weddings followed by a pregnancy before thirties has grown in importance over the past few years. This is a common dream between many women, but nowadays this dream is facing drastic changes due to many factors. Globalization, economic crises and increasing population numbers are contributing for that. I strongly believe that couples need to be aware and convicts of their situation before decide to have children before thirties.
Although an early marriage and pregnancy is a desire for many couples, there are some factors that need to be considered. Firstly, due to the world economic crises which made the number of available jobs decrease considerably and also the real state industry increasing prices exponentially, directly affecting millions of people and their dreams of constitute a family and buy the first residence. Secondly, the cost of living is reaching numbers that average salaries cannot afford. For example, a study from Boston university showed that nearly one third of the newlyweds in which the couples were below thirties, do not intend to have children. The central reason behind this is the uncertainty of being able to provide a decent life for their children.
However, this scenario is a tendency for our reality these days, I firmly believe that this situation is a negative development in the society. Many families are being constituted late or even not starting. For example, women having their babies after 35 years old is a risk not only for the mother’s health, as well for the baby. The child can be born with malformation and very weak with a risk to develop diseases due to their fragile immune system. On the same way the mother, that can face serious health problems and also a big risk of losing the child.
To conclude, a mature decision must be made for the couple. Not only the desire of an early marriage with many sons but, more important than that if they would be able to provide the basics for the children like a health environment, education and support. In my opinion a balance between the desire versus reality must be taken in consideration before take a decision. After that within the couple limits, decide a proper age to get married and have
their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Their
... a proper age to get married and have their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98677248677 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63985110622 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568783068783 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5809747855 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.722222222 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114300795694 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337958182144 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355314537179 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665658494952 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174207505318 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.