Traveling around the world is one of the most exciting things in the world. In the past, it was difficult to travel, it took a lot of days, and not everyone can travel, but nowadays it is easier to travel on a plane, just buy a ticket and fly. There are advantages and disadvantages to traveling that I will talk about now.
Initially, I will start with the benefits. First, you can earn money when traveling. We now live in a technological life that you can do like advertising by taking a photo or video and sharing it on social media that way you can have fun and work at the same time.
Second, the country's economy will increase. When a lot of tourists come to the country and we can provide business opportunities like we can put together a guide or companies that organize excursions and other tourism-related businesses.
Moreover, it makes people feel happy and educated. If people feel sad or suffer from the pressures of work and life, they can go to tourism outside the country with their families or friends to take a break.This way they make them feel better, they can see another culture, and they can learn from the good things.
Now, I will talk about the disadvantages of that.First, terrorists can enter the city, but the government can control this by increasing the security services.
In addition, it makes the country more crowded.Forexample, I now live in Istanbul which is a crowded city because it is a tourist city but organizers can solve it by creating more streets, hotels and restaurants.
In the end it is a big topic and I said what I think. I would like to say that I admit that it is too expensive for some people to visit foreign countries, but I can also very strongly confirm that it is worth spending a lot of money because in modern times it is very stressful and travel allows for a break from this monotonous schedule.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53412462908 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68098550138 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9477789571 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103843294156 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324382937016 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373287258625 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454110651575 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456724425182 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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