Topic: Many people believe that economic development is necessary for a country’s success. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such approach?
The abundant group of residents speculate economic attainment is obligatory for nation’s prosperity. This essay makes a comparison of how demerits outweigh merits.
Firstly, to begin with, developed countries had constituted progress in achievement of various goals, happiness, satisfaction, steadiness and success in mandatory sectors of life. In addition, enormous substantial benefits were accomplish through the legitimate economic development. However, it enhanced the living standards of populace in terms of education developed technological innovations, and balanced distribution of capital and utilization of human resources. For instance, the commercialization of farming persuaded the improved quality of production inputs. Yet, another utmost advantage of economic revolution is better seed management practices and enhanced pests and control diseases.
Furthermore, in spite of influenced merits some demerits were incorporate because of these changes. Vast critical dilemmas are atmospheric pollution, marine pollution, and human waste management. For example, excessive air pollution has generated vigorous problems, which affected human modus vivendi and consider as life threating. For example, depletion of ozone layer, acid rain, desertification, deforestation and greenhouse effect are result of air pollution. On the other hand, smog is serious issue arose from toxic chemical exhaust emission from cars and are common among cities.
To conclude, in my opinion economic achievement is compulsory to sustain a blissful life. We ought to be considering contradictory effects on human organisms as well. Cooperation with authority a balanced approach to be formulate to have a more divine control and foster enthusiastic societies. Policies to be implemented which contribute in establishing robust environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accomplished'.
Suggestion: accomplished
...ion, enormous substantial benefits were accomplish through the legitimate economic develop...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'incorporated'.
Suggestion: incorporated
...of influenced merits some demerits were incorporate because of these changes. Vast critical...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.26771653543 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.328781483 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708661417323 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0756708171 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137055432741 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353008213625 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369293455364 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749238201176 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438842700764 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.41 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.79 12.4159519038 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.9 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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