Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages of disadvantages to a country?
Many countries around the world encourage tourism and travelling visitors. This essay will explore the merits of tourism and discuss a demerit that comes with it.
On the one hand, tourism has been a major tool for economic boost in several countries. As travelling visitors are allowed into a country, majority come in with a lot of money and are most of the time excited about exploring the country which would result in economic growth. For instance, when visitors are allowed entry into a nation, they will quite often spend a lot of money- sometimes in local restaurants trying out new cuisines and in local businesses purchasing souvenirs from the the host country. Also, tourism exposes people to learning and understanding different cultures and practices. As people from other nations travel into countries they are alien to, they tend to pay attention to the behavior of the people living there and also try to imbibe best practices that can be taken back to their home countries. Take for instance some Nigerian chefs that visited china and were able to learn how to prepare some Chinese food and the use chopsticks. They took the knowledge back to their home country and improved upon their food business.
On the other hand, tourism may open up a nation for enemy invasion. As a demerit of tourism, enemy nations could send their spies into a community under the guise of tourism meanwhile they have ulterior motives and this exposes the people to harm. For example, armed bandits can enter into other countries as tourists and wreck havoc without been noticed because they were allowed in following due process as tourists.
In conclusion, although tourism has a demerit of allowing adversary attack, the merits far outweighs that as it brings about economic growth and a better understanding of different cultural practices. Hence, tourism should be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06430868167 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51413637484 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1507384165 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232737363863 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096416002749 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894881806362 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176593310253 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759040415484 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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