Travel is most enjoyable when you are in a group conducted by a tour guide.
Do you agree or disagree?
Travel - either to known places or unknown lands can always be adventurous, inspiring and experience gaining in life. The question is, is it better to travel single or in a group conducted by a guide?
To elaborate, first of all, while some advocate that group tours are the best as they can be budget friendly, fun-filled and safe; I am of the view that such trips can steal one’s privacy. For instance, a part of my Euro Tour in 2009 with a group of 15 odd people was quite nerve breaking. We were in a group, there was great socialization and we were safe; however, it was different people, different mindsets and one destination! At the end of the journey, all of us wanted some peace and quiet. Hence, group travel can be quite taxing on the mind and can defeat the purpose of pleasure.
Secondly, group tours always take tourists along a beaten path where escorts only show oft-visited places like parks, palaces, museums, monuments and the like. A different or an unexplored destination is always overlooked. To drive home this point, in a group, the minority suffers. To quote from the same tour, even though we visited France, I could not get to the Louvre Museum since all my co-travellers wanted to be at Disneyland. I felt very disappointed because my choice had been vetoed. Thus, often, individual choices are overlooked while travelling in a conducted tour.
In conclusion, although there may be great advantages like economy, safety and fun while travelling in a group escorted under able guidance; according to me, the disadvantages far outweigh the merits since people like me prefer to cherish privacy, independence and freedom. Therefore, I find such mass travelling very boisterous, chaotic and unexciting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96917808219 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81955884047 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633561643836 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7770593742 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153936743071 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590833061783 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451789548695 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974802758775 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249678875215 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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