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Globally many people considered that individuals are learning an international language for exploring and working at foreign nations whereas others think that they can also study this language for other benefits. While the majority of teenagers considered the usage of this language for only travelling and residing in overseas countries, I believe that many individuals may pursue their career by studying this international tongue.

On the one hand, the vast majority of people who are keen on exploring distinct locations and working professional believe that they are not able to make a step ahead without having a perfect knowledge of the overseas language. This is because, indeed to make any kind of exchange or chat, it is mandatory to have information about their language. Therefore, with having a background of language we can make easily all the activities and make a hurdle less communication. For example, the majority of traveller learning local language or English tongue when they are travelling to countryside areas of different countries so that they can make a fearless conversation with local people. However, These opportunities do not provide them with a chance to learn this language in depth through which they can enhance their future goals.

On the other hand, some persons who are linguistic by their profession, trying to learn it for their future growth. This is because they are considering that they can use this language not only in their day to day conversations but also they can be a well-known interpreter. Besides this, they can earn a good amount of revenue and have a strong position in society. For instance, the tourist local guide at the Taj Mahal is the one who had learned English and french language from childhood so that they can explain the importance to international travelers, and can earn a huge amount of money by guiding them. I believe that this school of thought has a more positive influence in society.

In conclusion, although learning a new foreign language assists individuals for smooth conversation during their traveling, I believe that with this learning they cannot only make their career but also they can make normal conversation fluently.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can make normal conversation fluently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1782729805 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85121679863 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495821727019 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0469102277 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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