The issue of whether or not children should be vaccinated against diseases has been a heatedly discussed topic in the recent years, and this has turned into a dilemma facing many. Some people believe that vaccines are dangerous for children while others do not agree. Personally speaking, I would assert that vaccines was necessary and safe for children.
The practice of vaccination should be banned because of some potential dangers. Some companies that want to save costs develop and sell fake vaccines. For instance, there were many people still dying after they got vaccinated in Africa a few years ago. This horrendous incident was caused by those companies using the water to replace the real vaccines. That led to a lot of people who were suspicious of the vaccines. Nevertheless, this does not necessarily mean that all vaccines are fake and unsafe.
In fact, vaccination is absolutely necessary because it can protect children’s lives. According to a health report issued by the United Nations, more than a third of human deaths are closely intertwined with the deadly diseases that we still do not have vaccines against. For example, there were not any flu shots in some underdeveloped countries where people lacked sufficient medical care thirty years ago. Many children with a weak immune system were prone to infections or deaths. Fortunately, after the vaccine was developed, there was a sharp decrease in the number of flu-related fatalities.
In conclusion, both of the two views have their pros and cons, but still, I maintain that children getting vaccinated is necessary, as its beneficial effects outweigh the rest. Therefore, the idea of having children inoculated against preventable diseases should be promoted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not children should be vaccinated against d...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...ke and unsafe. In fact, vaccination is absolutely necessary because it can protect children’s lives...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24014336918 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75893016149 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6587130379 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197936693259 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648325592952 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574908655693 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132661206421 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640877044753 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.