The way nowadays people engage with each other changed due to technology. Has this change a positive or negative development? Discuss and give your opinion.
The modern advancements in the field of science and technology has an enormous impact on human life. In this regard, it is a general hypothesis that technology has turned the human race into lethargic living beings and has also affected the emotions which tend to be of great proportion of the personality as a whole. Indeed, I strongly agree with this argument and will elaborate the major aspects further below.
To begin with, there is no doubt the scientific revolution has certainly brought the comfort and easy reachablilty to the inhabitants of this world. However, the negative traits are leaving a detrimental result not only on our health but also on the way of life we used to be habitual of. For example, smart phone does offer a number of uncountable benefits, nonetheless it has fairly effected the way of socialization. Previously, we loved to hang out with friends and family members but now a days these cheerful moments are at the verge of disappearance. In short, it is needless to say that we, people are losing our social nature as it is quite evident from our behavior in daily life.
Furthermore, the vast exposure to gadgets has reduced our capability to sharpen our skills and advanced ourselves in the field of interest. Since the masses devote their valuable time on astray aspects of technology .In addition, people nowadays have developed the sense of self-centeredness. They usually cares about the areas of their liking and do not take into account the well-being of others as a responsible member of the society. Lastly, the rapid adoption of modern machines are making everyone to fall into darkness of isolation.
To recapitulate, I pen down by saying that proper management is essential to maintain a balance as we are transforming more into technological giants but emotionally empty individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'care'
Suggestion: care
...ense of self-centeredness. They usually cares about the areas of their liking and do ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, nonetheless, so, well, for example, in addition, in short, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0393442623 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96316180268 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629508196721 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9329919727 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.230769231 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999027569486 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313318007855 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275460988675 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0481897662696 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311712574323 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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