The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations.Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest a has been updated.
Population of any nation is considered to be its strength which can contribute their efforts to uplift their country. In this regard, population has always remain one of the major concern that every government is facing still in this 21st century. In fact this essay illustrate the issues that dense population causes and effective solutions to overcome this problem.
To begin with, the most difficult task for any administrative setup like the government is to control the growing number of inhabitants in an area, For example, Pakistan is quite reputable in this context. The statistics indicate a massive increase in population over the last two or three decades that now the basic health and hygiene, education, shelter and other facilities have been quite scarce, Secondly law and order situation will get affected as every individual of the society will try unlawful means to earn a living. Thirdly, unemployment will certainly be increase as a result of poor education structure which will lead the country's economy towards that fatal decline. In short, overpopulation seems to be single problem nonetheless it gives birth to a series of serious hindrances.
On the contrary, it is believed that every hurdle comes with the number of possible counterpart solutions to fight against the advancing menace. For instance, China has really showed the way forward to minimize reasons behind rising community issues. First and foremost, Chinese government has passed a law that every family can only have a maximum of two children. Furthermore, exploration of new resources is necessary to furnish inhabitant with the necessities of life. Therefore it is likely it is rightly said if there is a will there is a way.
To recapitulate I pen down by saying that undoubtedly overpopulation demands considerable attention with the same time proper resource management and regulations of the best strategies to be implemented in response.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, nonetheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28802588997 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94930867756 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8754756943 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.692307692 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128990504312 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395738880891 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369901541278 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06444328871 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366402487477 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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