In many developing countries there is problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
A large number of progressive countries are facing the issue of air pollution and water contamination that is caused by both industries and construction. In order to prevent air pollution, deforestation and banning harmful chemicals can help in making the environment less polluted whereas formulating laws and penalizing industrial and construction firms can help in reducing water contamination.
Firstly, to reduce air pollution, the elimination of deforestation is vital to create a healthy environment which will reduce the allergies and skin infections that poses a devastating effect on human life. In other words, planting more trees will facilitate people with fatal lung diseases such as asthma to breathe without any difficult, thus, creating a positive impact on their lifestyle. Secondly, banning the sell and purchase of harmful chemicals that pose a serious threat to the environment and introducing environment friendly chemicals as replacement will contribute in enhancing the air quality. As a result of this measure, the ozone layer will be preserved and diseases like skin cancer caused by the harmful rays of sun will reduce drastically. For instance; Australia has introduced eco-friendly air fresheners as a contribution towards a healthy environment.
One way to minimize water pollution is to develop laws and regulations under the supervision of a regulatory body which continuously monitors the waste management process of industries and construction sites. In addition to this, imposing penalty on the firms that violates the rules would help generating revenue that could be invested in awareness programs that can help the public as to how they can make their contribution in creating an eco-friendly environment. According to a survey report published in New York Times, developing countries that have a fully functioning regulatory body has reduced water contamination by 25% as a result of the policies and mechanism created by those regulatory bodies.
In conclusion, the quality of water and air can be improved by deforestation and eliminating the use of harmful chemicals whereas setting up a regulatory body that efficiently monitors the industrial and construction sites will surely lead progressive nations towards a healthy and eco-friendly environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of progressive countries are facing the is...
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Line 9, column 296, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to generate' or 'generate'.
Suggestion: to generate; generate
...irms that violates the rules would help generating revenue that could be invested in aware...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, thus, whereas, as for, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64655172414 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26792747474 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3124750067 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.636363636 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6363636364 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7272727273 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183087521193 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719653369081 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549513424056 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119289918104 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457352436349 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.