the way nowadays people engage with each other has changed due to technology. Has this change a positive or negative development?
Discuss and give your opinions
The best invention humankind has made is technology. The way people interact among themselves has differ before emerging technology. The technology has bring some positive and negative impact in our lives. Let discuss the impacts.
First of all, the good part of technology is that people can communicate with each other on a single click of button. Anytime they can talk to their friend and family using mobile devices. The other way to interact is video calling. Its feels just like you are communicating face to face with each other’s where we can see the live emotions and feelings. As technology growing, the social platform give people a better way to communicate. This bring us the latest news, trends, people likes dislikes and most of all fast communication. These days communication become so fast that we don't need to travel from one place to another.
On other hand, technology has bring some drawbacks while interacting with each other’s. Spending large number of time on social engagement will effects your health. The other drawback is we are emotionless. Interacting with people over technology, we don't determine the true emotion behind a person. The face to face conversion is far better than the video calling. The emotions express physically has a greater impact on human nature. Like express anger, expressing happiness.
In my point of view, technology has changed the engagement dramatically. One cannot live without technology and we use technology one or the other way to interactive with peoples.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20161290323 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84894370406 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9104226133 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.95 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268207870419 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728484016241 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493664138298 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155260539033 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141483273835 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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