We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, one of the most controversial issues among the authorities of the developed countries is whether to help the less affluent countries or not. Although people have different views on the issue of helping the poor countries, I believe that it is the responsibility of developed countries to
help the developing countries.
On the one hand, there are some advantages for the developed countries who are concerned with helping the poor countries. Firstly, it would be beneficial for the rich countries to help the developing countries by investing money in their industry since it will bring some benefits for them and it may improve their economy due to the cheaper labors and the natural resources that are available in these countries. Secondly, it would be a positive propaganda for these countries who help the developing countries particularly in world's social communities. Take for example a country in which some natural disasters happened such as earthquake, flood, typhoon and the like. In this situation the government and the people will suffer and it seems impossible for the government to make impressive improvements in short time; so it would be other nations' responsibility to help these people and these helps will be reflected on the News all over the world..
On the other hand, less affluent countries need the indispensable help and support from other nations to make progress and development in various fields such as industry, education, health and etc. Furthermore, less people will be interested in migrating to developed countries in order to lead a happier life which will have a positive effect on host countries since they would provide social welfare for the residents of their own country. Moreover, we are all human beings and we are responsible about each other. A salient example of this are African countries who suffer the
Lack of fresh water and food; while in some countries the governments held parties and invest in some researches that are just vanity projects for them.
In conclusion, not only the morality and consciousness make motivation among people to help the poor countries, but also it is a burden on the developed countries' shoulder to manage assisting the developing countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20936639118 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90025214138 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482093663912 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8517540241 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.583333333 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172345744719 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821766300894 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533450303892 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1053524703 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605876061262 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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