We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree?
With the development of technology, internet becomes the essential part of everyone’s daily life. Internet has many benefits; however, the privacy and information stealing have become the largest drawback of the system.
There are several advantages of using internet. Firstly, People can easily connect with their friends and relatives in a fraction of seconds even if they are in any corner of the world. Secondly, data and information sharing are easier than the old post mail services, which was taking long time to reach at proper destination. Finally, many internet websites help to educate people and to get knowledge of interest field. To exemplify, many webpages like Wikipedia, Google, etc. help to find academic and work-related articles. Therefore, everyone can increase the knowledge of the world.
On the other hand, however, every coin has two sides and despite of all upsides of internet, there are some downsides too. Data and personal information theft are the most significant demerits of the internet. Hackers can hack the person’s highly confidential information in small amount of time. Moreover, if someone is travelling somewhere, then his/her location can be detected by anyone. This surveillance system may reveal the person’s classified location so that some may not feel safe to travel with internet used devices. One recent survey revealed that many developed countries use these types of control to monitor human’s movement.
To conclude, I reiterate and believe that there are many issues in terms of personal identity and security. In my opinion, disadvantages outweigh the advantages by using the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47265625 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82745319628 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65234375 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2178938258 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4117647059 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163321149114 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535743982445 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511356546499 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102352519574 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235669190843 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.